Should you simply reject their offer? Or should you try to negotiate with a letter?
But how to write it? To whom should you address your letter? And how to make sure it won’t close you the door to their company forever? Let’s have a look at it together:
Main parts on an excellent letter
First part: Praise and pleasantries
In the beginning of your writing, you should thank the employer for offering you a job. You should emphasize how happy you are for the chance to work for them.
Dear Mr. Xxx,
I am really pleased to receive a job offer of (name of the position) from your company. You, as well as the philosophy and vision of your company, made a great impression on me. I thought about it for a while, and I believe that I can utilize my skills and contribute to the prosperity of your company, becoming an asset for your team. But before it happens, I would like to discuss a few details with you.
Second part: Say what you want to change, and give them a good reason
Do not waste too many lines with pleasantries. It is time to come to the point. Mention what you would like to change, and try to give them a good reason for considering your suggestion.
You offer a basic annual salary of $50,000. According to the information on (an online source, ideally with a clickable link), the average salary for this position in this city is above $58,000. I believe that 60,000 would correspond better with the experience and knowledge I can bring to your team.
I have made $56,000 in my previous job, and though salary is not my main motivation, I would like to earn at least as much as I have been earning up to this point. Please consider $60,000 as my basic salary.
Third part: Confirming your interest and closing the letter
At the end of your letter, it is important to leave the door open for further negotiation. Tell the employer that you are open for discussion. Stress your intentions to deal with the problem quickly, so you can start working for them soon.
The position of (name of the position) is really a job where I can imagine pursuing both goals of your company, and my personal goals, with a great success. Please, let me know what you think about my suggestions. I am open for a discussion, and look forward to start the job with your company soon.
(Your name and contact details)
Do not forget to address the letter to the right person – the person that gave you an offer. If your claims are realistic, and if you can justify them, you should get what you deserve. The team at InterviewPenguin.com wishes you good luck!